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THE RED SEA

Moses of my heart told me
Like Moses at the red sea
That God will fight for me;
The Egyptians will cease to be.

The Egyotians were behind me
Pharaoh approached the sea
Fear then fell on me
Amidst wilderness and redsea.

Amidst wilderness and red se
I must get moving to the sea
I must cross the red sea
Since, God can't wait to see.

I can't also wait to see
Myself back at the sea
Crossing it and be free
Since they've cut the dream for me.

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